Sunday, November 11, 2012

Silly Macbeth, prophesies are for witches!

1980. A recurring theme in literature is the classic war between a passion and responsibility. For instance, a personal cause, a love, a desire for revenge, a determination to redress a wrong, or some other emotion or drive may conflict with moral duty. Choose a literary work in which a character confronts the demands of a private passion that conflicts with his or her responsibilities. In a well-written essay show clearly the nature of the conflict, its effects upon the character, and its significance to the work.

            In the play Macbeth, Macbeth’s downfall is his desire for power. At the beginning of the play, he is a war hero, highly esteemed by the Scottish king, when he encounters three witches. The witches prophesy that Macbeth will be made thane of Cawdor and eventually the king of Scotland. As Macbeth starts to see these prophesies come true, his desire to have power conflicts with his duties as thane and as king.
            After winning a war for Scotland, Macbeth finds out King Duncan has named him thane of Cawdor. As thane, he constantly thinks about the prophesy three witches told him: he will be king of Scotland. When King Duncan comes to his house that night, Macbeth and Lady Macbeth conspire to kill the king in order to obtain kingship for themselves. As king, Macbeth spends a majority of his time worrying about his old friend, Banquo, and his son, Fleance. Along with the witches’ prophesy that Macbeth would be king came the prophesy that Banquo would father a line of kings. Because of this, Macbeth has Banquo murdered and tries to kill Fleance. The more Macbeth feels his power is in danger, the more he tries to prevent it from being taken from him, even killing an innocent man’s family out of fear.
            Macbeth’s need for power and the murders he commits because of it leave him insane, and eventually lead to his death. After Banquo is killed, his ghost appears to Macbeth, along with three other apparitions. Seeing these ghosts, Macbeth raves and appears to his guests to be talking to himself. As his castle is under attack, and Macbeth realizes his end, he still fights, unable to give up his power willingly.
            Macbeth’s struggle between his desire for power and his responsibilities as king provides for most of the action in the play. Had he been able to stand up to his wife and not kill King Duncan, Macbeth never would have had any issues, and Macbeth never would have been written. His inability to mediate between private passion and responsibility not only provides for his inevitable downfall, but also the meaning of the play as a whole: power left unchecked ultimately results in destruction.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Bri,
    Reading this post has made me realize how much I had forgotten about "Macbeth". Great job writing about everything in the prompt. I liked how you explained things very clearly so that people who haven't read this play would be able to understand your thoughts and claims. I think that you picked a perfect piece of writing for this prompt because everything fits quite nicely. The only thing I would say is to expand a little more on the significance to the work. By creating this self-destructive character, what is Shakespeare trying to show to the audience? Aside from that tiny suggestion, I think this essay would definitely recieve a good score on the AP exam. Great work!

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  2. I thought this was a pretty good response but could be improved a lot with a few small things. You talked a lot about how he had a desire to keep his power which was really good; I was able to understand it even though I haven't read the play. However, I think you could provide more examples or explain how this gets in the way of him being king. Another thing that is important to do is to make sure you explain how this adds to the meaning of the play in total, as Julie mentioned. Remember how Holmes stressed that we need to answer every part of the prompt! Overall though, I thought it was a pretty good response. Keep it up!

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  3. After I read the prompt and the instant I saw you were writing about Macbeth I thought this book was perfect for the prompt. I really liked that you talked both about what the witches told him and his desire for power, but I think the response would have been stronger if you had talked about how the witches fueled his desire for power. Since the writing is timed you would have been able to summarize the aspect of the story you wanted to talk about more quickly giving you more time to explain it. You did a great job describing how Macbeth's need for power affected the events of the book but you should also explain how it affected the meaning of the work. Showing how Macbeth's desire for power affects the meaning really shows your understanding of the book and adds to the essay.

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