1984. Select a line or so of poetry, or a moment or scene in
a novel, epic poem, or play that you find especially memorable. Write an essay
in which you identify the line or the passage, explain its relationship to the
work in which it is found, and analyze the reasons for its effectiveness.
Edward Albee’s play The
American Dream is his criticism of the formation of a new ideal, a new
dream that came to popularity in the 1950s and 1960s. Albee uses Grandma and
the Young Man to showcase the differences in the old American dream of hard
work and real values and the new American dream of having money and artificial
values. One line from the Young Man provides the most obvious statement of
these differences: “I'll do almost anything for money" (109).
At this point in the play, Grandma and the Young Man are
talking about what kind of work the Young Man is looking for. Up to this point,
the audience has only seen glimpses of Albee’s criticism of the new American
dream through Mommy and Daddy’s commodification of everything in their life.
Neither of them has outright said they are looking to be wealthy, but comments
about “satisfaction” and Mommy only marrying Daddy for his money have left the
audience with the sense that they are money-seeking, corrupt people. When they
adopt the Young Man, after he says this line, and appear to finally be
satisfied, it is clear to the audience that money is the driving force in Mommy
and Daddy’s lives.
The Young Man’s line was effective when Albee first wrote
the play, and in the years since then, the line has become more effective, but
only on the surface. The Young Man as a character is devoid of feeling and as a
result is sometimes difficult to relate to, and this line only enforces that at
first. The idea of doing anything for money is preposterous to most audiences.
When it becomes clear that this line was Albee’s big strike against the
American dream and way of life, the audience’s first reaction is to take
offence. The line takes an accusatory tone, suggesting the American people will
do anything for money. However, instead of taking to heart what Albee is saying
and changing their ideas of happiness and success to better reflect the old
American dream, audiences shrug off accusation assuming Albee could not be
talking about them specifically. This enforces the idea that the Young Man’s
line is only effective on a surface level.
Albee’s use of his characters to represent the differences
in the new and old American dreams helps the audience relate to the message
Albee is suggesting. Although the Young Man seems impossible to relate to for
most of the play, when he says, “I’ll do almost anything for money,” the
audience is forced to consider what they would do for money and if they are
more like the Young Man than they thought they were.
I really like the line you picked! I think it does a pretty good job at summarizing the new American Dream. I liked your comparison of Grandma to the Young man and you used specific details effectively to support your argument. I still think you need to explain what you meant when you said that the line was effective as this line is way to vague, What was the line effective at doing? Anyways I really like how you used some DIDLS to support your claims and your examples were all very good. Your ideas for the most part were very clear so awesome job!
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